Artlander: votes = 1
I would like for you to be the height of the wind, the weight
of a dream.
For you to have the hair of the night, the smile of the moon
Your eyes to announce the daybreak,
As I wake up, next to you, every morning
On our new paths, just walking
I would like for your skin to reflect my skin as they become one
For your kisses to grow all over me
For your thought to nest with my thoughts
And your steps to lead mine, mine yours,
In perfect reciprocity
I would like for you to trust the rise of a new world
For you to embrace the birth of me, imperfect man
To bare with me the growth of new hope
In a new garden full of voices
Harmonizing, living
I would like for you to hold my hand and run with me under the rain,
both naked,
Both free and bound to nature in continuous pulsations,
Both intertwined in the rhythms of passion
Dialoguing, breath to breath
Earth and sun, non-stop
October 30th, 2007 at 8:26 am
Dear Artlander, Thank you for your participation!
Your Perfect Woman sounds beautiful, a poem.
She is an idea of a relationship, the belief in perfect intersection or a soul mate:
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FROM ENCYCLOPEDIA.COM
//www.reference.com/search?r=13&q=Soul%20Mate
Soulmate (or soul mate) is a term sometimes used to designate someone with whom one has a feeling of deep and natural affinity, friendship, love, intimacy, sexuality, and/or compatibility.
A related concept is that of the twin flame or twin soul – thought to be the ultimate soulmate, the one and only other half of one’s soul, for which all souls are driven to find and join.
However, not everyone who uses these terms intends them to carry such mystical connotations.
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This is actually a tall order, I don’t know if I could be someone’s soul mate, but I’d like to believe it is possible.
Thank you and good luck,
-Your Perfect Woman
November 3rd, 2007 at 2:49 pm
I’m happy and relieved to hear that physical attributes are not the first thing on these men’s minds. We’re each a unique, irreplaceable combination of characteristics. They seem to be open to serendipity.
The Perfect Woman’s inclusion of quotes from other websites seem like a wedge to keep the intimacy and openness of these men’s submissions from entering her heart. She acts as if she’s in control.
I can’t wait to see what happens next. I love these guys! And I love the Perfect Woman!
November 4th, 2007 at 2:52 am
Nice ‘wedge’ admission there Chassis spoken like a true revolving axle.
The Mystical connotations of the twin soul or the twin flame? I am only familiar with two tales of those kinds. I am sure everyone knows one or two people who’ve dreamt dreams of other places.
But I see that questioning the basis of love as soul mates is not a good way to start a relationship. So whatever attraction there is to the soulmate has to be physical and emotional and intellectual. If the connection can reach a level of attention where they meet in dreaming THEN your really kicking ass!! Cuz you’re twin flaming it on Midnight side of Dreaming!! If I ever write for the popular mass market New Age Hippies Somebody shoot me!!!! LOL J/K
The Midnight Side of Dreaming
By Carlos Castaneda
November 4th, 2007 at 2:58 am
Edit: 1:53 PM
Following Should Read:
New Age Hippies Groupies!!!! Arrghhhh!!! Somebody shoot me!!!! LOL J/K
Simon and Schuster gg©.
November 4th, 2007 at 10:39 am
Have you ever heard the wolf cry to the blue corn moon
Or asked the grinning bobcat why he grinned?
Can you sing with all the voices of the mountain?
Can you paint with all the colors of the wind?
Can you paint with all the colors of the wind?
can you?
November 4th, 2007 at 10:42 am
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January 24th, 2008 at 11:20 pm
I think that you could be someone’s sould mate. Wha makes you thinkyou can not? Would that make less perfect?
January 24th, 2008 at 11:23 pm
Hey Chassis,
I agree with you. It seems that Perfect Woman is trying to keep us form entering her heart. Perhaps, she doen’t want to be hurt.
January 24th, 2008 at 11:29 pm
Unknownpoet0016 is right. For me too, the attraction has to be physical, emotional, intellectual and real. For that kind of connection I do not need a “perfect” woman, but just a woman.
January 24th, 2008 at 11:29 pm
Can you, hmmm?
January 24th, 2008 at 11:52 pm
Perfect Woman
~ William Wordsworth
She was a phantom of delight
When first she gleam’d upon my sight;
A lovely apparition, sent
To be a moment’s ornament;
Her eyes as stars of twilight fair;
Like twilight’s, too, her dusky hair;
But all things else about her drawn
From May-time and the cheerful dawn;
A dancing shape, an image gay,
To haunt, to startle, and waylay.
I saw her upon nearer view,
A Spirit, yet a Woman too!
Her household motions light and free,
And steps of virgin liberty;
A countenance in which did meet
Sweet records, promises as sweet;
A creature not too bright or good
For human nature’s daily food;
For transient sorrows, simple wiles,
Praise, blame, love, kisses, tears, and smiles.
And now I see with eye serene
The very pulse of the machine;
A being breathing thoughtful breath,
A traveller between life and death;
The reason firm, the temperate will,
Endurance, foresight, strength, and skill;
A perfect Woman, nobly plann’d,
To warm, to comfort, and command;
And yet a Spirit still, and bright
With something of angelic light.
www.links2love.com/poetry_57.htm
January 28th, 2008 at 11:13 am
“I think that you could be someone’s sould mate. Wha makes you think you can not?”
I’m just not sure how to become someone’s soul mate… “the one and only other half of one’s soul.”
I can try, but is being the other half of someone’s soul an intrinsic quality, or something you can work toward?
Thanks,
-Your Perfect Woman
February 20th, 2008 at 9:15 am
Hello Perfect Woman,
I think both. The intrinsic quality equals willingness, openness, trust, sensitivity, and the ability to feel and express affetion and love. Working towards it implies an active attempt to search for, identify, find, discover and couple with that one and only soul-mate whose genetic imprint matches with one’s own.
February 24th, 2008 at 12:14 am
I cant agree more with you mate.